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Friday 23 August 2019
Cross country fun!
I enjoyed cross country because
It was fun and creative and challenging.
Hi Jade, my name is Jess, I go to Kumara School on the West Coast of the South Island. This post stuck out to me because of the hooking title and the pictures. I love how you described how you felt, heard, wondered and saw in your cross country race. I challenge you next time when you are describing something that's fun to use different describing words. Your cross country sounds lots of fun. My favourite paragraph was the I wonder one and the I felt one. I really enjoyed your post. Keep it up Come look at my Blog http://kumarastevensonj.blogspot.co.nz/
kia ora my name is manaia and i go to mangapapa school i see that the cross county fun run looks really cool and i wish i could do that.if you did the course i wonder how long it took?
Hi Mya it was not that hard because it was a fun race instead of a hard race,My favourite part about the obstacle course was the slip and slide,I liked cross country because it was fun.
Hi Jade, my name is Jess, I go to Kumara School on the West Coast of the South Island. This post stuck out to me because of the hooking title and the pictures. I love how you described how you felt, heard, wondered and saw in your cross country race. I challenge you next time when you are describing something that's fun to use different describing words. Your cross country sounds lots of fun. My favourite paragraph was the I wonder one and the I felt one. I really enjoyed your post. Keep it up
ReplyDeleteCome look at my Blog
http://kumarastevensonj.blogspot.co.nz/
Jess
Wow thank you for your amazing comment! Thank you!
DeleteGood job everyone on your cross country good try
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletekia ora my name is manaia and i go to mangapapa school i see that the cross county fun run looks really cool and i wish i could do that.if you did the course i wonder how long it took?
DeleteKia ora manaia we had 12 minutes to run around our school field and thank you for your feedback
DeleteHi Jade. what did you like about cross country.
ReplyDeletewhat was your favorite part.
was it really hard.
Mya
Hi Mya it was not that hard because it was a fun race instead of a hard race,My favourite part about the obstacle course was the slip and slide,I liked cross country because it was fun.
DeleteHi Jade,
ReplyDeleteI like how you described
you race really well
good job
keep up the good work
-Mereana.
Kia ora Mereana thank you so much for your positive feedback!
DeleteHi Jade It looks like it was super fun I wish my school did that also you described it very well!!!!
ReplyDeleteFrom Carter
Hi Carter thank you for your kind comment!
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